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Old 02-12-2007, 06:39 PM   #1

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Help me writing Welcome header please

I tried, tried toooo hard, but I am not able to get the welcome header guest message as I would like. May be becuase english is not my native language.

Here is my temporary message inspired from another photo site. Could you please help me writing a neat and sweet welcome header message

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Old 02-12-2007, 08:40 PM   #2

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ps, I would use an images for your welcome header info

you can see it on my site,, its the banner in my sig


this is to help SEO, if you need help making one, I can point you to a few tutorials.
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Old 02-12-2007, 09:16 PM   #3

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thank you brandon. I read it on your site and I will be putting it soon. But before that I need help in copywriting this stuff in nicer words

any help in that direction would be great
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Old 02-13-2007, 12:15 AM   #4

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First of all, I wouldn't put the "get rid of this" part first. I"d put it last.
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I think its pretty good, the one thing I would change is what RM suggested, move the first part to last.
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Old 02-13-2007, 11:59 AM   #6

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thanks for the feedback this is other one I have written but not able to decide on which one to use. Which do you think is better for a visitor?

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Old 02-14-2007, 04:26 AM   #7

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I like the list format better, personally, because your visitors are more likely to read short items in list format than they are paragraphs. I know it's kinda hypocritical to say that because ours is in paragraph format here at AF...It's just another one of those things that needs changing.
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List format is better i think, get straight to the point for those quick travelling visitors... like a sign on the freeway hehe. (short, stands out and easy to read)
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Lists are way better than paragraphs. Unless the paragraphs are only 25 characters wide. (like a newspaper)
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