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![]() | What do you think of my sites introduction statement Quote:
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| The Webmaster ![]() | Remove the comma after "Our goal" since it is not needed. Also I personally wouldn't put superb in quotes but that's up to you.
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![]() | Quote:
sound better?
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| Rookie | Which site is that mission statement for? Without the quotes, it does look better, but give us the link to the site so we can see if your mission statement corresponds to what your site provide. Remember, never go too far then what you actually got. |
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![]() | true well i changed it to a introduction to the site Neocrisis.com - Your gaming and anime source - Home
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