What do you think of my sites and forums new mission statement

**jazzking2001** · 05-01-2008, 09:11 PM

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Our goal, is to bring you a fully interactive and fun experience in this site. To this effect, we have compiled a "superb" collection of articles that you are going to find interesting.

i think that is a pretty good one

**Moelman** · 05-02-2008, 12:12 AM

Remove the comma after "Our goal" since it is not needed. Also I personally wouldn't put superb in quotes but that's up to you.

**jazzking2001** · 05-02-2008, 12:18 AM

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We bring you a fully interactive and fun experience in this site. To this effect, we have compiled a superb collection of articles that you are going to find interesting.

this is what it was changed to
sound better?

**Garala** · 05-02-2008, 01:29 AM

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Originally Posted by jazzking2001

this is what it was changed to
sound better?

Which site is that mission statement for?

Without the quotes, it does look better, but give us the link to the site so we can see if your mission statement corresponds to what your site provide.

Remember, never go too far then what you actually got.

**jazzking2001** · 05-02-2008, 01:33 AM

true
well i changed it to a introduction to the site
Neocrisis.com - Your gaming and anime source - Home

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